TheSingleWayOut's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alternate Careers: Mario!]

nice animation with a good dry wit.

Law & Order: Mushroom Kingdom

Where the **** is the princess?

[I am a loser...]

Interesting

Fake tears only hurt those who care about you, a fake smile only hurts yourself.
This is an interesting flash with a relatively understandable premise. One that you captured quite well.

I did no give you a time, because nothing is perfect, and you do have a few places that you could improve in. The singing voice was good, but a few outtakes to make it a bit more understandable to the listener who may not like reading subs. Also the transitions were chopping in some areas, but it didn't really take that much away from the overall effect.

I hope to see the second part here soon, and hope to see more wonderful work from you that shows growth as a flash animator.